All Comments on 'The Bicycle in the Meadow'

Very nice! Thank you for letting us readers travel this journey you wrote.

You write well and set a romantic, enigmatic tone. I do strongly urge you, however, to not switch POVs between characters. This is disruptive to the flow of the story. I hope you have more stories to share.

Thank you for your feedback!

I enjoyed your writing style and the cerebral sensuality you portrayed in both characters. I actually thought you did a nice job using dual POV's and pulled it off well. You have a talent for including the emotions of the characters in the story. I enjoyed that. Well done Goddess!

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback.

Good first story! A very fortuitous meeting for both parties.

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Thank you, Boyd Percy. It was, indeed. For both parties. ;)