All Comments on 'The Bikini of Brevity'

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KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 2 years ago

Hilarious, That's all I have to say cuz sometimes less is more.

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsabout 2 years ago

Excellent! Two wise old owls, still enjoying the best life has to offer, albeit in their own humorous way!! That's a quality 750- word composition, Yowser! 5- stars and keep up the good work!!

bottovarnisbottovarnisabout 2 years ago

interesting commentary! We old guys do indeed have something left. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

No need to show off your vocabulary.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireabout 2 years ago

Great fun and great job, with the story as brief and enticing as its subject. Okay, maybe as brief and almost as enticing?

:-)

5*

lctflctfabout 2 years ago

Keep on fighting the good fight!

elizalooelizalooover 1 year ago

Perfect-exactly the conversation I'd imagine between two older dudes sitting on the beach, watching the hotties in their bikinis!

jennyphiljennyphil29 days ago

Reminds us of the fun we had selling micro bikinis https://photos.app.goo.gl/NxZzPini5Kzz4Bqm8

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