All Comments on 'The Bisexual Submissive Pt. 02'

Amazing!!!! Please keep writing.

orgasm denial, such a double edged sword! Love the way the story is progressing.

Tess (uk)

Incredibly erotic. I love how Ryan took more control of Nikki and how she submitted to that control. There was a definite UK flair to the writing, and love the subtle differences when compared to American authors. Very enjoyable and a great read.

There was a clear hard limit of no full public nudity and Ryan (an inexperienced dom) pushed her to cross it and Nikki (an inexperienced Sub) let it happen. If limits are not respected, i'm not sure how that relationship is described. Its a pity He didn't push it so far and showed he respected her limits and/or that she didn't enforce her limits and safe word out. In fantasy land trust is give and abused way too easily.

Leaving a sleeping person tied up and unsupervised!!!!! Wow

The denial is deliciously tormenting. Ryan took to his role like a duck to water. Well done!

Another excellent instalment! The denial and forced exhibitionism was very exciting.