All Comments on 'The Black Goddess Emerges Pt. 02'

Premise still worthwhile.

But delivery poor.

Get that editor/proofreader.

NAUGHT means zero. What you meant was NAUGHTY.

You wrote: "...making her finger rob at my prostate. Jesus chris,". You meant RUB not ROB. And, good grief, Jesus ChrisT has a T at the end.

Just repetitious. Two stars.

Please link your 5 star story here, if you have one. Otherwise, please leave authors alone who do an effort to get you off.

Great setup so far!! Can't wait until you introduce her friends and they all take turns on him. Loving the causal race play and sph too