All Comments on 'The 'Blacklion' Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Oh......my gawwwwd

I have enjoyed the entire series.

Rae Anne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nice

Glad to see you have resumed writing. Well written and enjoy your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Looking forward to more!

Excellent story with a well developed character and an ember hot slow build. I am definitely looking forward to your resumed efforts in the series. Please get back to it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Highly impressive!

One of my new favorite characters. Well written and original, with a perfect pacing to the story. I loved reading it (several times in fact) and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter and seeing how it concludes. Please get back to it soon, this site needs more writing talent such as yourself, who are willing to share their gift with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MORE!

Make the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
extremely erotic

Very well written indeed. Good character development along with good chemistry and a slow sexual tension build. Great going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

What an utterly phenominal story, the main characters huge prize winning cock and the sluts love of it is something else. I love the way he just destroys her with his cock prowess. Yes, she's his slut to fuck forever more now.

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