All Comments on 'The Blue Pill Pt. 04'

wonderful , so please can you continue ? . thanks

Well done. You leave the reader throbbing and wanting more!

You've really kept me guessing with this one. First I didn't think I would like the story at all because it wasn't really transgendered(more sci-fi/fantasy). Obviously that wasn't an issue after the second chapter. Then you surprised me again with the story taking a romantic turn.

Overall, I've really enjoyed it. I'd love to see it expanded as well. Some backstory on Jonathan and Simon/Simone; what else is going on in their lives. Introduce some conflict maybe(not necessarily between the two of them). This isn't to say the story isn't good as is, but it could really be something if it was fleshed out a bit more. You've also created a world where pretty much any sex scenario can play out; so there are endless possibilities in that regard.

weather Simon or Simone Jonathan will fuck them both will be equal in loving pleasure