All Comments on 'The Boy with Condition XXX'

by KINGPHANTOM

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muskyboymuskyboy20 days ago

Nice scene, but this is not a story. 4/5

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

"To be continued...."

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Good story. Needs a chapter 2 though

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

mas largo y mas lenceria

mikerod4mikerod420 days ago

Vary nice and hot also yes please continue

KINGPHANTOMKINGPHANTOM16 days agoAuthor

Author here, for those who are confused about 'chapter', I dont know how you guys missed it, it clearly says 'Prologue' in the beginning of the story. This is the prologue to the actual story. Chapter one will be following soon...

Tica21Tica2115 days ago

By all means continue. Write about how the good doctor convinced all the mothers to become involved with their sons. Good work!

LechemanLecheman13 days ago

Hmm maybe BOLD Prologue next time....even blind people appreciate guidance...~

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