All Comments on 'The Boyfriend Pt. 05'

I’ll always be on board with more Tasha. It will be great when she and Blake start interacting more and getting friendly.

Ive really enjoyed most parts of the story , but i dont understand why most parts are so short? Especially nonerotic or parts lacking any real sex? Why not combine nonerotic parts with a 2nd chapter? Im here to read sex stories n as is ur chapters can be way too short, even stretching 1 sex scene thru 3 dif chapters. Id give 4-5 star votes if it wasnt for how short, barely a full page at times. Other then that, its been a great story. I just hope u dont add some 3some or sex with another character that just doesnt fit the story or is forced into the story when it doesnt fit with whats been going on up to that point.

<3 Yay for the Tasha love!

I like tge character development you are doing here. Seems tgere is more in everyone's past that most are keeping hidden. Nice to see them all come clean with eachother some time.

@Hardrider <3<3<3 Thank you! Glad it's being appreciated!

I can't find Tasha's story. Am I just blimd, or is this a future part?

@Anon Tasha's story ends just before/at Winter break, so her story is in the past. Check out my profile/bio to find it!

I like the character but she to me at least does not seam like Liam's type. She is the type of friend that you can talk about anything with.

@diablo I think you're the first to express that opinion, but I like it! <3

@rorr I had some scenes that were a bit indulgent at first, but I'm trying to visit future chapter ideas every so often to continually refine them and make sure they can be as efficient structure/story-wise as possible. As for the length, that sort of just gets determined while writing. I've had scenes I thought would be longer end up shorter, and ones that I thought were going to be short little snippets get quite long.