by M_Petal
Very short and to the point! What the point is, I haven’t a clue, you might want to consider a setup or backstory when going in cold or it leaves everyone confused. Nice try for a first story and you appear to have chosen some type of man made sexual partner or an alien or mind wiped-hypnotized slave. Any of those do show promise once you iron out a few problems. Thanks for posting it regardless
I love this. Its perfect. No backstory was great it's just a fantasy and its great!