All Comments on 'The Busty Doctors Wife Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well written story deserves 10 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Interesting read, please keep these stories coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another exciting read, more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Monster Cock, Big Busted women you have it all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Where is chapter 02?

KittyLover80KittyLover8012 months ago

Wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. Very interesting plot. Looking forward to each additional chapter. 5 stars.

walkindatdogwalkindatdog10 months ago

Dude's got skills, yo! And plenty of stamina, keeping up with five women, all of which are ok with sharing with no jealousies. A bit farfetched, i'd say. But, hey, it'f fiction- why NOT go over the top? Quite the harem. I had two girlfriends at once back in my 20s and it had good and bad points, but no interaction between the two.

One minor thing that bugs me is when a writer feels the need to tell which hand is doing what to which breast: my left hand fondled her right tit. Maybe look for other adjectives. It was a good read, but would be better with less stilted, more realistic dialogue, Thanks for writing. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Make someone pregnant...

redlion75redlion756 months ago

What happened with the other chapter

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