All Comments on 'The Camgirl Pt. 29'

I hope you guys enjoy this! I think it pairs quite well with what's going on on Liam's side of things! Btw--let me know if you've seen my comment responses! I try to go through each chapter and respond when I see comments on them! You guys are awesome btw! <3

Sorry, but this was not up to the standards of the rest of the story in my opinion. This is why I am not a fan of dream sequences, this made Blake sound more like a high school freshman being with a guy for the first time. I am still a fan and will be back for the next chapter.

Pappasleaze!

You are doing a great job on this story line. I am happy to see Blake is sorta dealing with things better than expected. I think the next chapter might be just a bit different. Good work so far.

Papasleaze thank you for the feedback! I was trying to make sure that it showed her really getting pulled into the fantasy/audio she was listening to, so I'm glad I accomplished that (just the feeling, not necessarily the age thing) I'm really curious to see what you think after the next few chapters--if you think it ties into the rest of the story well enough. Glad you're still a fan of the overall story, though! <3

have you experienced any of the stuff u have written in these chapters?

Part 29 Sucked compared to the first 28!