All Comments on 'The Carnival'

It's glittering not gistering but who cares? Well written, compact tale, thanks. Five stars!

It probably doesn't get better than this.

Beautifully written, creepiest qliphothic mermaid ever, easy 5*

I've always had a soft spot for mermaids, and this has a beautifully "Guillermo del Toro" feel that I simply adore. Elegantly written, with a compelling story in which themes, characters, and sex scenes all complement each other. Well done!

I don't know what this is doing on Literotica, it reads like it's straight out of a Stephen King short story collection.

Bravo.

Not my cup of tea but it was well written and the writer did an amazing job keeping readers hooked wanting to know what will happen next

Please do a story with an albino girl! Preferably a Vampire or fairy. Maybe erotic horror but ending in servitude, either bound to them or a place.

This felt a lot like the twilight zone. I could almost hear Rod Serling at the end.

Fantastically well written. Puts me in mind of Ray Bradbury in style