All Comments on 'The Cellar Ch. 01'

by JohnChristian

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TransferBanTransferBan11 months ago

Great start, would love if he was forced feminised

sealandssdsealandssd11 months ago

A good start I suppose. May I ask whether Harris will be killed in the end?

HumiliatedMenHumiliatedMen11 months ago

Really great start and I like your writing style. Hope to read more soon!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I loved it! I'm so intrigued to read what's in story for poor Dalton. So hot

undies4lifeundies4life8 months ago

Enjoyed the first chapter. I hope you will post the next one(s) at some point.

AspieGirl88AspieGirl886 months ago

First time viewing Literotica for a while & this is the first new story I’ve read … quite a thriller, I must say & admittedly fills my mind with so many questions! I hope you do decide to write more chapters to this story, as I’m sure we’re all wondering what’s going to happen with Dalton. 👏

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Please, please, please continue this!!!!

JohnChristianJohnChristian5 months agoAuthor

Wow, I completely forgot that I posted on this site! Happy to continue this :)

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