All Comments on 'The Chase 04: The Burning Ache'

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spearman1 over 14 years ago

Great Story

This was really great. Keep them coming!!

Anonymousalmost 14 years ago

CONFUSED

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

LOVE IT

I really like Mikes chaeacter!!!

5/5

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Choppy

I know the point to the last bit will be explained in following chapters, but the whole story seems a bit choppy so far. It could use some transitional sentences or something to that effect.

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