All Comments on 'The Citadel Ch. 11: The Master'

I’ve read the first 3 or 4 chapters, this is painfully dragged out. So I skipped ahead to try and find out who this Sir Malcolm is and what she’s supposed to have done only to discover that the plot has left the building and its devolved into weird tentacle monster sex??? I don’t understand why she’s been raped in the dungeon (or at least that’s what was implied in this chapter) before she was taken to him?

Sooooo confused. Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

Please continue

It ended rather abruptly don't you think? Will there be more?

It is rather well written, Thank you.