All Comments on 'The Closet'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow!

This is so well written. I love the detail, and how much you fit into such a short piece. And that the dom and sub clearly have a relationship outside of their sex life. It’s sweet, and the story is just awesome. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Exceptional piece of writing

This scene is very well crafted, I think that the thing that makes the entire thing it erotic is the attention to detail he has regarding safety protocols and his overwatch of his gf/ partner/ sub.

Without that it would just be random psycho abandons gf in a cupboard like a spare toy.

Genuinely loved this story, thanks for sharing

Tess (UK)

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