All Comments on 'The Collaring of Chloe Ch. 23'

A great chapter as always. I'd forgot about Sally, but she's great, can't wait to see more of her, along with Butterfly. Not too sure about Sugar yet and those looks he's giving Chloe, hope he doesn't want to steal Mittens away from her!

Really interested to see what happens next. Keep up the good work ^_^

5/5 stars

Thank you! It was amusing having to adapt this into it's own chapter, as it was originally the first half of the chapter, but just ran so long that I decided I could make two out of it. Sugar will appear from time to time and will eventually become a very significant character, but not for a while.

Sally was someone I wanted to come back to (George too) and am quite happy with what I have done with her. While she's not based on anyone specific, in a lot of ways she's based a number of 'Brat' submissives I've known. :D