All Comments on 'The Community Pt. 01'

Great Story. A new twist in BDSM. I loved it. Can't wait to read more.

I have just finished reading all of your stories. Where are the rest of them I think that I am hooked on your style. You have a great gift. I just feel sorry for my boyfriend tonight. I am so turned on right now I may not be able to control myself. Thanks for the great read and a horny start to my day.

You need to use decription in your story. The framework for this story is okay, but without details you sound like a kid learning to write. Tells us how he had sex with her, was it hard, fast, or slow? What emotions did she experience? Learn to write with details or don't bother, it's a waste of time.