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by Melodramaticphysician

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RiseOneRiseOneover 3 years ago
Too confusing

It's the kind of story where the author has everything written out in his head but gives readers only a tenth of it. It starts with psychics, magical nukes... We need a proper build up, man (or woman).

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Writing! Posting stories on literotica, longtime reader. Many stories were first posted on my website. Slowly editing them and posting them here. If you want more, https://www.wattpad.com/user/Hermanshermitage

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