All Comments on 'The Cruise Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Too bad you took the path of lust instead of love.

Especially with a wife who is supposedly almost asexual and fucks everyone.

Kinda stupid, no?

ejsathomeejsathomeabout 1 year ago

Average. Lots of description, not a lot of emotional intensity. Glad each chapter was short. Not a lot invested in this story. Cleanly written, however, and that I appreciate.

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

Not even good enough to dislike.

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