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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Screaming in an office...?

Keep setting in mind while you’re writing, the content was good but didn’t make sense for him to be slapping her ass and her to be screaming in an office at the end of a work day, when people are still around.

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Love to combine the dirty little stories that play out in my head with some real life experiences to create my stories. Hope you all enjoy them!

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