All Comments on 'The Cuddle - A Sweet Family Story Ch. 01'

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DwaynedomentntDwaynedomentntabout 1 year ago

Great concept, looking forward to more of this.

redpoppiesredpoppiesabout 1 year ago

That was interesting, but I can't help thinking about all those women who are going to go into a drug store to buy an 'aphrodisiac' expecting greater sexual pleasure and instead they are going to die—horribly, painfully from consuming bleach.

mancamdenmancamdenabout 1 year ago

I cannot wait to hear the end of this story! Very cheeky and hot! Thank you for posting!

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royaleabout 1 year ago

A fun premise. Heading for chapter two.

RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

Great idea! Something different and different is good, especially here. I started 30 to 40 Shit stories not worth the first page until I found one amazing story. A lot of that here. Author, thank you for NOT writing a dot dot dot story full of Hyper-Hyphenations! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.