All Comments on 'The Cure Ch. 05'

Nicely done. Good to get the backstories on each of them. 5 stars & a fave. One comment about word use. As this chapter unwraps their feelings of love for each other, words like "tit" and "juice" seem incongruous with the mood; crass in the face of tender. Other synonyms would almost certainly enhance the telling & descriptions.

Really nice pace, and characters we can relate to. Well done. Thank you.