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Click here"So, a good first date?" he asked.
"Well, I've never had one quite like this before, so points for originality, I guess."
"Come on. You're coming home with us right now," Ryan said.
"Okay, but I have to ask you something first."
"Anything."
"Is there something in my butt?"
It was instantly back to beetroot city for Ryan. He flushed so hard it almost made him shake. He had totally forgotten about his little surprise. He took a deep breath and composed himself. "I might have popped one of those little ink bottles in there at one point. I think it was an orange one," he confessed.
She sighed in resignation. "Well, we're not going to go for it now so you'll just have to help me with it later."
With that, Ryan lifted her to her feet, but the indignities were not quite over, yet.
First, there was the fact that her shirt no longer covered anything else but her sides. Second, her panties were nowhere to be found, but to be fair, they'd probably be useless anyway. Her fishnets were still somewhat wearable. With her skirt and her boots and a little jacket she had, she could just about sneak through the outside world, though.
In the taxi, Ellie reached into her cleavage and pulled out Ryan's missing keys. To his quizzical look she replied by telling him that he had already dropped them at Lizzy's place, and not at the tattoo shop.
When Ryan, Remy, and Ellie got back to his apartment, they were greeted by the smell of food. Melinda, Doctor Andrews that is, was there, and she had been doing some good and honest home cooking. She'd had a sense there would be guests so she had made enough for everyone.
Annie from work was also there. She told Ryan what had happened after he left the office, whispering in private:
Annie had woken up to Claudia shouting at her secretary. Fittingly for a secretary, Claudia swore her to secrecy. Claudia had offered the poor girl no excuses or explanations. As far as Natalia, the secretary, could tell, Ryan just barged into the boss's office and then had almost an hour of floor shaking and furniture breaking sex with said boss and a colleague of theirs while some weird unknown amazon lady held the door shut without any panties on. What Natalia didn't know, though, was that that was all true.
Annie also told Ryan that Claudia had cursed him to all the hells for ruining her clothes again. Annie and Claudia had had to wait in the office while the secretary sent everyone else home. That was about the extent of Annie's story. As far as office gossip goes, this was bound to reach over nine thousand by tomorrow.
The rest of the evening at back at Ryan's was quiet and peaceful. Melinda and Remy had some trouble sitting right, but other than that, it was all lovely. The girls made some cursory introductions and gave each other some measuring glances but there was little actual conversation.
Remy got the most of the glares since she was the only one who had not had a chance to shower, and she was barely wearing any clothes, and she had purple hair, and she had tattoos everywhere, and piercings and...
She took a shower right after dinner and Ryan got an answer to the question he'd pondered earlier. Remy really was absolutely and completely gorgeous even without any makeup.
By midnight, Ryan was ready to sleep the sleep of the dead, but there was one more issue to solve. Annie and Remy both showed significant interest in sleeping in the same bed with him. For a moment it looked like they were getting ready to fight it out.
Eventually, Ryan managed to convince them that they were all in a very unusual situation, and some unusual arrangements were going to be inevitable. The result was that, at least for now, all of the women got equal rights to sleep where ever they wanted -- in his bed, in the guest room, on the couch, or in their own homes.
Ryan went down cold almost instantly but he got to see Annie had come prepared. She had brought her own pajamas. Remy had to design hers out of Ryan's clothes. Somehow, Annie ended up feeling like she had lost that round.
Melinda was going to sleep in the guest room.
The last thing Ryan felt was the warm embrace of two incredibly beautiful women, one under each arm. It was a good thing he had such a big apartment and such a big bed. Other than that, he didn't have much. Except for women now, apparently.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoWhile I like the first chapter, the thought of him having to have every girl every day... its boring. I like the build up and excitement of figuring things out. The lust and control during is hot. That being said, I got bored. A threesome and three other girls in one chapter is too much.
Anonymousover 2 years agoJust a general thought. For me, harem stories are always way more interesting when the women are real people, with their own wants and desires, and as a group, they have some challenge to overcome than spiritually or socially relevant. It can be from world peace to improving a nearby elementary school. Just something that gives their life meaning an purpose beyond the next shopping trip or orgy (See A God Called Bruce & Three Square Meals for examples). That's just my POV. Love the story so far, looking forward toward more.
Ferrumitzalover 2 years agoOkay, a good second chapter, but I felt that it was too big on the sex and too slim on the actual story.
There's something big going on here, and I get that all the women have to get their first initial dose, but.... the sex scenes were simply too much.
Here's the thing -- this world is presented as a normal everyday world like we live in. Everything's been regular, so imagine the complete flip out any normal human would have just to learn for real and true that magic exists and there's some kind of other plane of existence. Some hot harem babe knocks you down on the street, and all of a sudden you have a very intricate tattoo? Then a super-hot amazon chic shows up, talking funny, and tells him he's cursed.... but he doesn't go off the deep end with a million questions about where she's from, how this happens, what other magic stuff is out there, etc????
I get that there might be some kind of compulsion in the magic that's keeping him a little calm and cool, but there's only so much a guy can take. He just discovered that magic is real. He just discovered that there are creatures not of this world. He just discovered that he has to care for a slew of women, keeping them sexed up to the point that he can't possibly keep working at a regular job.... and the whole story so far has revolved around him boinking. While I understand that sex is part of the story, I think it's going too far and superseding the tale. All of the indoctrination sex, the first times, could have been handled off-screen so we could get more into what this tattoo means and what the parallel world will mean for our hero and his harem. To have the hero so blasé about the whole new world opened up before him because he gets to boink some hotties just stretched the suspension of disbelief, imo.
Anonymousover 2 years agoThe thing about MIn control is that it is a fantasy about using the power to take and claim women in a taboo way. If the protagonist cries and whines about it calling it rape and feeling horrible/ guilty it kind of kills the gimmick of the mind control story. If you want the character to be a “good” guy concerned about consent Wright a story in a different genre. I want a guy that is happy use his gift in a mind control saga.
Anonymousover 2 years agoGreat second chapter. Enthusiastically waiting to see how things progress. The humor is spot on.
