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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoYou really wrote the Cam character as a massive dumbass pussy. His first wife divorces him and he stays friends with her. She deceived and lied to him so he rolls over and let's her tickle his tummy. He allows Celia to do what she likes. The way younwrote thier interaction it is obvious to a deaf dumb amd blind person that she is cheating but he cant see it. He really is a pussy. How is he such a succes in business.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoone thing though I don't get how quickly Celia fell out of love with her "true love" and husband. OK so she flirts dances and apparently sluts around - not sure though why it turned into such a level of disrespect and hatred and so fast.
Anonymous4 months agoHow did the MC think a marriage with Celia would ever work? If you can't trust them, then seriously how will marriage fix that? Not talking about some isolated case where they fight, she gets drunk and crosses a "dancing" line and they argue and make up afterwards. Even then hold off on the wedding and get some counseling or at least really talk it out. But seriously putting a ring on a spouse's finger doesn't change their behavior or personality. Kim was different. She came out of the closet. It sucks but there was no malicious intent. Just a bad match for marriage but they remained good friends. Totally different.
Anonymous8 months agoMC was a bit of a clueless schmuck. His friends bailed him out on several occasions.
RileyKing10 months agoWanted to give it 5 stars but settled on 4. Needed to see Cecelia suffer more and maybe have that conversation of regret. Ending left me a little unsatisfied but a great story otherwise.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI saw a comment by angelrider on your evil woman story. She is right about your heroes. You have a propensity to make your male characters super businessmen, ambitious, smart and talented while also developing them as complete fucking imbeciles in their relationships.
This story is a prime example of that. This dude was a simpleton. I will concede that your stories flow well but your decisions are consistently horrible.
ZippityDoDaDayover 1 year agoDecent story but an explanation was needed as to why Celia acted the way she did. Was she in it with Marcus to take his money from the beginning? Enquiring minds want to know.
