by TMaskedWriter
At what point do they realize that they've left Claire down at the party for Helena to pick up as a toy?
Wondered if someone would pick up on that. Sounds like the kind of thing that might come up later...
Okay, so I know which stories follow up to this one, but it sounds like I'm missing some prequels or something. I'm a huge fan of the Derek Flint movies, but I'm still lost. I understood the hypnotic wheel, but the bikini and wig went over my head too.
You need to do a revision for this that includes previous titles to read or something. It's like I jumped into the middle of a bigger story leaving me confused because I'm lacking background for what's going on. 3/5
Sorry about that. My bio page lists the order of the stories. The wig and bikini are there so Julie can dress up as Gila Golan in that scene. Troy & Julie have had a hypnofetish since before they were old enough to comfortably call it a fetish, so they were totally into that scene.