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KJLarsonKJLarsonover 1 year ago

Nice work; pace is good, vocabulary is not over the top. I'll be interested to see the following installments to see if the characters develop with any depth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I never understand these stories, where the results of the blackmail is worse than the reason for it in the first place.

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Had dreams of writing and making movies when i was a younger man. Got old and missed out on lots of things so now i just fantasize. I know these stories are pretty simplistic. To be honest, they were written quickly and wildly. sort of like my brain puking up some things it ...