All Comments on 'The Debtor Ch. 02 - Post Surgery Training'

Well, the grammar really takes a lot out of the story theme. The tenses seem to shift back and forth. I am not sure who is talking or thinking quite a bit of the time. WOuld have liked to have more detail of her time with Inga and her training. All we get is what happened but not what she was thinking. How did her larger tits affect her balance? How many cocks did she suck and how many times did she gag? What did she feel when she found out about the post while she sucked the dildoes? Later in the story we find out she now has three posts? When did that happen? She never saw her husband again? Did she sign any divorce papers? I assume that Bess will continue as a high priced hooker since she has been transformed to be a well trained pet.