All Comments on 'The Defiled Temple Ch. 01'

You have a Whedon-esque ability to subvert the genre of witches, demons and imps. I like a lot of humor in my dirty stories, and you deliver. Thanks!

Keep it dirty.

This was some of the funnest stuff I have seen on this site. There door of demon cock sucking wow hilarious. I cant wait to read more. Thanks for sharing Mechmanas.

i love this story, it kept me laughin from the moment pugward showed up, cant wait to see where you take this, i cant wait for your next chapter dont keep us waiting to long please!

I too like how everything took a bit of a left turn after Pugward showed up. Can't wait to see more!

Why do you need such a long gruelling opening? I don't need to know so many facts to enjoy the story.

If it's important - like sacrifice of the farmer -SHOW ME

Otherwise it's prett tough to get pass it to the real action (live scenes, I'm not talking but the sex.)

Afterthat it became much better. The imp was very impish and much fun.

OK - this isn't going to be the regular demon meets beauty story. The question is, what is it going to be? This could go anywhere. I'm looking forward to exploring!

This story was hillarious. I mean look at the characters, they all have thier copies in the real world. You have the mussle-bound jocks that think they are perfect and also the women that flock around them then you have the slighter (OK much slighter) more intelligent ones finding a way to even the score and of coarse, thier women that don't quite fit in in society. It sounded like a highschool or college story with a twist. I would only ask that there be a second chapter, so we can figure out if there will be a happy (although strange) ending...I hope so.

This is interesting and funny. I await more of the this story and Aphrodisia. Pugward just proves its not the looks but the skill than makes you powerful. I just wonder if she gets her girl and the demon.

Love the Pugward character. Utterly looking forward to reading subsequent chapters!!! (And I don't even like big tits.)

I must congratulate you, this story had STYLE, especially the final section.

hahahah --- even without any sex at all, this looks like a great story :D

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it, I expect it'll be as awesome as the rest of your work.

-- just do me a favor and don't forget to give us more Aphrodisia!

flipin exelent i love the little fella

Damnit I laughed so hard XD will totally read the rest. Btw, your other story about the orc(only 1 chapter) got me here. Keep it up.

Love this start, Pugward is one hell of a badass! Also came here from the missing dragon, this one could be even better, I love the humorous angle your taking here!

It's always the little shits that are the dangerous ones. I love the concept and I can't wait to read more.

This stands very well even without the erotica, which is a real compliment.

This is really FUN. Instead of the usual Tall Handsome Hero, we have a little somewhat slimy, little, but powerful, smart, and sarcastic Pugward, and he knows how to handle all the shitheads assorted nasties.

It's always a pleasure to find some humor on Literotica, and this story has LOTS.

Congratulations on a truly fresh, humorous, great story!

Bozo

OMFG!!!

The last page..... oh MAN..... the neighbors probably thought I was mental or something... ehehehehehahahahah..... just like Pugward... hahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

His last statement was... was... totally HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story. Thanks.

I couldn't stop laughing

I'm in love! Haven't laughed so hard in a long time! God bless you!

Man I haven't laughed that hard in a while, looking forward to the rest of the chapters

add a humor tag or a lmao tag

Yes! Laughed myself sick! Puddin' tits and all!

Pugward should have taken a left, but didn't and ended up where he needed to be.

I know a "pesky gway wabbit" that lamented losing directions. "Nyah, I knowed I shoulda toined left at Alba-koikee."

Story is great fun! Thanks for sharing!

Gatta love that attitude.

i really hope Lien_Geller continues this story, it is fantastically funny

Awesomely hilarious

I fucking love this Imp. lol

Is it just me or does anyone else here Danny Devitos voice for pugward

But personally I'm holding out for Andy Hamilton. When it comes to Snarky Denizens of the Eternally Damned, that lad has the market cornered.

You really do have a great gift for writing. I was laughing my butt off reading this. Good work!

Nice to meet a story with a little esoteric imagination with humour in it.

I fucking love that line. And I too imagine Danny Devito talking when I read Pugwards voice.

I love this story. Talk about one for the little guy.

Laughing my head off here. never thought porn could be funny also. Like the other hear Danny Devito speaking when Pugsworth talks. More, more more

Awesome

a most hilarious story

This is classic. This is starting out as one of the best stories here.

Fantastic intro to another great read...!

This is great...!

certainly a 5 and marking as fave too + Follow Author

looking forward to Ch 02

Oh now this is fun, best story I've come across in a long time