by Trevormartinaf
Found this very distasteful, there’s virtually no difference between this and Human Trafficking. The cultural divide is literally worlds apart. She’s not in a position to give or withhold consent. As it stands I can’t see anything sexy about this, it has/ had potential to be erotic but it was very rushed and leans heavily into pain. Face slapping isn’t a sexy kind of pain, if you think it is maybe try getting someone to slap your face repeatedly, really hard. Then decide if it’s still sexy, after all a good dominant experiences these things first hand.
Tess (uk)
This was wonderful. It's very rarely that I find a reference to the south of India in erotica. Even rarer to find something that incorporates non-consent/reluctance into the plot without being extremely over-the-top. I understand why someone might find this narrative problematic but there are a lot of things in the cultural reality of India that are difficult to live with. And yet we do.