All Comments on 'The Dinner Party'

by k2211

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Horny CoupleHorny Coupleover 3 years ago

Very nice. My wife and I got very horny reading it. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So fucking hot ! Love it, more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Although I don't read many of the BDSM or Non-Consent things, I like to start with the earlier works of each author on here. I like your style and thoroughly enjoyed this story. I did notice several places where your word choice was other than I would have made, but you use Australian English and I use American English. Maybe a re-read before you post might be appropriate to catch the few noticeable grammar errors, but overall, I would and did rate you with five starts. Thank you for the enjoyment!

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I write for my pleasure, it's not perfect and I don't pretend to be a great writer. My writing is fantasy, it makes me horny and I hope it does the same for my readers.