All Comments on 'The Dog Walkers'

bad

not just cause they are all cheating peices of shit

becuase your editing sucks

put in scean break markers to show you are switching locations/perspectives

I expected some people would disapprove of the story. I wasn't sure how the back and forth scenarios would go.

I was also expecting some readers to dislike the extramarital aspect. But I never mentioned any deceit in the story. Nowhere is cheating even discussed or thought of. so if the reader sees cheating, it's assuming. Other people may read this and think "swinging".

I do appreciate feedback, especially when it criticizes my editing with misspelled words. Hilarious

Old concept of cheating neighbors but I like the touch of using the dog walk. Only issue is in the coincidence of the timing where each wife left at the same time and the finished in time. So did I miss the part where they set it up that way?

A big IF...If that was swinging or swapping and not pure and simple cheating, it should clear in the plot,,,Assume always what is the most simple solution: Cheating...1*

The timing and coordination of these cheating degenerates is astounding.

Just a “painting by numbers” sex scene. Instantly forgotten

I liked the style. The back and forth would have been clever if the story had any teeth to it.