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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Your writing actually seems to be improving with each installment and the storyline is very good. Only a few

grammar/spelling mistakes (not enough to be distracting) but you will likely improve in time. I look forward

to your upcoming chapters. Do what you feel most comfortable with but you might want to try some shorter

stories, too. Good luck and keep writing!

Howardw41Howardw41over 1 year agoAuthor

I really do miss having an editor. A good editor makes all the difference.

KevinTheEngineerKevinTheEngineerover 1 year ago

Enjoying the story so far. Hoping for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story thanks more please

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I apologize for the long delays between parts. I spend a lot of time writing and rewriting each part. I also come up with new ideas which divert me for a period of time as I write enough down so I don’t lose the idea. My goal is to make the action between people who love each...

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