All Comments on 'The Donor'

by stafbeck

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TestUser0815TestUser08159 months ago

Nice story!

I hoped for an end where Cindy would have dropped to her knees and swallowed his load, because she was so turned on that swallowing was more important to her than getting pregnant :-)

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Hang ur self cuck

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I like the story line……but it could’ve had a better ending. She didn’t get pregnant but fell for bbc. She ends up a slut for big cocks & eventually does get knocked up & dumps her loser husband.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

> She was reading a book by Ta-Nehisi Coates and drinking from a nearly-empty glass of mimosa.

Never thought I'd see that name in erotic fiction.

Ridiculous69Ridiculous699 months ago

Wow think it’s time to call the truck. This port-a-potty is overflowing. Just a waste

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

What happened to the Black Alpha Family story?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Glad to see you posting again!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

5 FUCKING STARS

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Missed your stories Stafbeck!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I loved the blowjob intro and the way you describe the physical features of Avon and the sisters is great

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Super excited for your part 2! I can't wait!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

God I loved the way you had Kaycee sucking cum off her fingers that was so fucking hot

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I hate this same ole stupid shit.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Kaycee will order Cindy to strip naked in front of Avon who will push down by the shoulders Cindy's 5'9" frame as Kaycee grips Avon's engorged cock to rub the precum under Cindy's nose and around her mouth as the offensive smell turns her off. Cindy says something offensive to Avon who throws her over his lap for a resounding ass reddening spanking until Kaycee pulls up her huge body frame and frog matches her to the corner end of the wall where she is to put hands on top of head and pay her penance to both Avon and Kaycee.

Discipline occasionally enforced on Cindy as both Avon and Kaycee enforce harder spanks on her reddening ass. Cindy treats them to a pizza delivery as she endures cramping in her legs as her hunger pangs bother her. Kaycee spanks her ass to keep her in place.

Avon finds an egg in refrigerator and gives it to Kaycee to be boiled while Cindy watches the boiling egg until she is ordered to crawl to kneel in front of the stove when she is being fed pieces of the egg after Kaycee tells her she has to drop poundage from her 140 pound frame to please Avon. Cindy is no longer a problem to them as she accepts her pregnancy by Avon

stafbeckstafbeck9 months agoAuthor

@anon, the black alpha family story got taken down for violence :( I can send it to u if you send me some deets of how to message u!

furlovingchloefurlovingchloe9 months ago

Like the idea but a bit long winded for me

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I only go on this site to read your stories. You're my fav author

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I like your stories a lot but this ending kinda mid. I really like when you have the whiteboi cucks mouth stuffed w panties. Can you have their mouths filled used condoms in another story?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Yeah I think it would've been a great idea to end w Cindy swallow Avon's load instead.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Yo where the college snowbunny epilogue/spinoffs at?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Would love to read those college snowbunny one shots you talked about

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Wished you would've done more with Kaycee and Johnny. Like have him worship her feet or fluff Avon. Maybe force him to stand in the sun naked so his dick gets sunburned and then she can jerk him off while he cries in pain

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle9 months ago

Great story. Please finish her journey. Need to know how you want it to go.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I hope you can do something more w Dr.Miller, some good potential there. She was really hot

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This hot af

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

100 women orgy story?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fuck! Love where this is going!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Ima give it 4 stars

GcoachGGcoachG9 months ago

Pretty fuckin hot!! 5⭐️s. Looking forward to her revenge, as long as it involves cuckold humiliation for Brett!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

The part 2 is going to be fucking lit. I already know

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Lol can you bring Aika back?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

New stories? Where's part 2?

taylorselenataylorselena7 months ago

Can you please reupload or send a copy of the Black Alpha Family story?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Post more stories please!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

my wife loved bbc, she passed away now but she just loved bbc

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Where part 2 at??? Dying to know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This is so fucking hot

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It was a great story!!! Having said that it was to close to reality for me. I have lost a beautiful woman to a well hung black man, because of my 4.5" dick. She said after she left me that it wasn't big enough to call it a cock, it is the size of a 10 year old boys dick.

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