All Comments on 'The End'

Oh my darling, big hugs. The one thing I took from my papa was that if anyone ever hits you, they are not your lover, they are your abuser. It can be hard, for those of us with a submissive side, because of course in role play one might crave a certain amount of being controlled. But there is the world of difference between that and the sort of gaslighting from which you suffered, I hope she got help too and that no one else has to suffer as you did xxxxx

Reading this story makes me wet

I hope writing that was cathartic. Your train-of-thought style is engaging, really brings us into your head. Thanks for sharing.

Whether this short story emerged out of fantasy or your experience as a Law Clerk/Victims Advocate or personal experience, the set of stories surrounding Cheryle’s troubling relationship with Lisa, which started so well, illuminates the reality of abuse while hopefully providing some catharsis. Cheryle budding relationship with Carol looks promising — we got a glimpse of how she differed from Lisa, but maybe more for us to enjoy.

I'm not sure how this story relates to your real word. We all accept that "fantasy" is erotic. When it moves from erotic to abusive that's a problem. Be safe.