by Boarboar
I really liked this story, and I wish I could give it a full five. But honestly, it kinda felt like it got cut off. The last paragraph with her coming back in is what really makes that feeling come true. It feels like the story could be longer, or perhaps simply cut slightly shorter. But it was still enjoyable!
I love these game like stories. Can you please go a little slower in the sex scenes and the characters. :)
That was fun. Maybe something more difficult for next time, he could have sex without magic powers possibly. Make a choice between saving one of two people from a disease or a burning building.