All Comments on 'The Enhancement Game'

by Boarboar

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ContractorOfLifeContractorOfLife2 months ago

I'm intrigued. I hope you have more planned

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I really liked this story, and I wish I could give it a full five. But honestly, it kinda felt like it got cut off. The last paragraph with her coming back in is what really makes that feeling come true. It feels like the story could be longer, or perhaps simply cut slightly shorter. But it was still enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

A great start. Looking forward to your next entry..

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I love these game like stories. Can you please go a little slower in the sex scenes and the characters. :)

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Great start! Cant wait to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Good start! Excited to see where this continues

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Interesting start! Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Looking forward to next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Looking forward to next chapter as well.

inthelatininthelatin2 months ago

Very enjoyable, thanks for writing and sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

good story looking forward to more!

JZStallionJZStallionabout 2 months ago

Enjoyed the story! Look forward to further chapters.

TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFakeabout 2 months ago

That was fun. Maybe something more difficult for next time, he could have sex without magic powers possibly. Make a choice between saving one of two people from a disease or a burning building.

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