All Comments on 'The Entity Pt. 07'

I've picked up each chapter almost as soon as they're posted, and am really enjoying the story so far. I do feel the need to point out the numerous and glaring errors present in each piece I've read by this author. There seems to be some confusion regarding the proper use of apostrophes and commas as well as a few spelling errors, almost all of which could have been easily avoided by simply utilizing a grammarcheck program. Just a minor annoyance, to be sure; it would take MUCH more than that to make me stop reading the work. It's just been such a constant issue throughout the body of work, and seems highly unlikely that this hasn't been brought to the author's attention by now. The work itself is very well thought out, good attention to detail... the sloppiness of the technical aspects is just beneath a writer of this caliber.

Editor. What your looking at is an unedited story written at high speed so as to get time to write more! The pleasure comes from the writing, not the editing which is just plain hard work. Be greatful your sharing his gift........Richard