All Comments on 'The Erotic Resort Ch. 03'

by johncitizen

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SirKevinSirKevinover 1 year ago

Great story, good dialogue, fun characters, but a lot of typos and spelling errors. Keep writing, and definitely avail yourself of the editors on this site. We're quite helpful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep going! The story is getting to the best part!!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please write more.

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