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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I hope she gets bred soon! Keep up the fantastic writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great premise and story so far. Please keep up the writing! Only small critique, would be to expand on the body transformation. Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wonderful writing Ava! The most sensible and realistic way of bringing alive a hucow fantasy!! Plenty of backstory and character development! Almost like a novella!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow, lady! This is exquisite writing!

boujie1boujie1over 2 years ago

This was great, but where is the rest???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Amazing! Please continue! Well written and immersive. Using the senses like you have exponentially improves the experience. Maybe add in the rest of the senses too?

Do you have plans for continuing the story? I'm assuming there is a possibility of meeting the brother, do you have any interests in that going somewhere?

Please! Inquiring minds want to read!

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I'm a lil bi girl, I like writing, I like reading, I like rubbing myself while writing and reading, hehe! I'm a new writer in here. If you happen to read any of my stories, here's a bear hug for ya. I'm cool and fun, at least I try to be, and I'm a new mom (to a cute beagle)!

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