All Comments on 'The Facility - Speak my Mind Ch. 01'

You would think that people smart enough to change someone which gives them any kind of power, would maybe get a psyche profile so you know what kind of a person you are dealing with. The story is interesting, entertaining and made me laugh. I laughed more at the ending even though I could figure what he was going to do to the doctor. Please continue because this shows great promise both as a fun story but it could provide so many more laughs which are always appreciated. Thanks for the story and especially for bringing the funny. 😂

J.D.

beautifully executed.

Love it please continue the story

This was so good. Hope you keep with it. Been wanting another great series since Vox finished

Villains have no creativity. How about "you will both secretly work together to release me. Your primary concern is my safe escape and future safety. Tell no one about this. Destroy any recordings of this meeting. Figure out how to get rid of these guards do we can talk in private."

I need much more of this. Wonderful premise and a great prelude to what will hopefully be a much longer story.

Looks like part of your story is missing after part 2 you seemed to be missing something and part 4 is the sam as part 3 .in other words we don't know how he made his escape after part 2.

Kuntera you have my attention. I appreciated the preamble. Guessing Ch. 02 is backstory and looking forward to developments afterwards.

Story not complete, chapter 4 posted in 2021