All Comments on 'The Facility - Speak my Mind Ch. 04'

ah... so suddenly our mystery person went instantly from being a prisoner in a black site to walking in a mall for the first time in their memory? Wow you totally lost me. Talk about plot holes. I had been very interested in this series until you just jumped a head... with no direction.

How did you go from 2 to 3? What happened with the jogger? So confused

Master_Doctor, stories are not always linear. Or maybe the protagonist genuinely had no recollection of those missed hours.

Kuntera, keep up the good writing. I am waiting patiently on my knees for the next chapter

This is a nice little series, but it appears you missed something when uploading chapters. There's a gap between this story and chapter 2. May I suggest you upload the missing chapter as chapter 2.5?

Otherwise, keep up the good work.

Apologies!! Accidentally published Ch 4 as Ch 3! No wonder everyone is confused. Sorry, I will do my best to fix this!

Feels like there's a chapter missing

Well the rhythm of reading your stories came crashing down. This was due to missing chaper. A quick hint. Check once, then once again and maybe one more time to be sure. It is like the adage - Measure twice, cut once.

Seeing the comments on both stories, I bet there's a problem with the linking, not just your upload.

I think you posted the mall experience twice, but not the escape. Great story thus far!

Even more mysterious. I find I have already rated chapter 1 and 2 even though they seem to be published today? Did you re release the first two chapters from a previous life?

Very short chapters. Writing is good, has a good foundation so far. Needs more flesh on the bones. Looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing your work.

The problem with MC is the lack of morality and that causes issues with consistency.

Why would a man who compels women to device him and feels no guilt refuse to compel a minor? After all, age is just a number and it’s not like he cares about minor things like laws, or morals, or even restraint.

There has to be a better reason than:it’s the rules of the site.

Tell me why your protagonist can force anyone to fuck him but he suddenly has a conscience and won’t involve minors.

This is how you differentiate beteeen shitty stories and great ones.

Chapter 4 is just a re-upload of chapter 3

Chapters 3 and 4 are literally identical. Where's the escape? The story seems good so far from what I've read. Just hope its fixed soon.

Chapters have been fixed, so now I am looking forward to many more chapters. Good story, wish they were a bit longer for each chapter.