All Comments on 'The Favorite Dish'

by krydy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
grade school

The story looks written by some grade school kid given the huge amount and use of "word...word" throughout. Author needs to return to early grade school and this time learn how to properly write.

Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago

You have stimulated that part of my brain that crosses the signals for both food and sex to give me erotic pleasure!

Your writing style mimics the eagerness of a pot ready to boil with lust!

This is a sensory delight....thank you!

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Hello to all those who will listen to my vocal performances, who will watch my artistic works and read my little stories. I am an Italian artist, painter and photographer. What do I want from life? All new experiences that can bring me a smile on my lips and stimulate my five ...