by krydy
The story looks written by some grade school kid given the huge amount and use of "word...word" throughout. Author needs to return to early grade school and this time learn how to properly write.
You have stimulated that part of my brain that crosses the signals for both food and sex to give me erotic pleasure!
Your writing style mimics the eagerness of a pot ready to boil with lust!
This is a sensory delight....thank you!