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All Comments on 'The First Affair'

by Ella_May_Author

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Yes...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please give in and write again...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Well crafted story , leaving the possibilities to expand and even take off in new directions , if you so desire , a viable option . As a first story it was remarkable , you write like a seasoned pro ! 5 well deserved stars

Ella_May_AuthorElla_May_Authorover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your feedback! Part 2 is on the way, I look forward to hearing what you think :)

CybersleuthCybersleuthover 2 years ago

To find a partner as needy and as uninhibited as you makes enduring the restraint of a marriage to someone not of a like mind even more painful. I loved this story but I hated the feelings it evoked in me. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Meh premise.

Not a fan of asphyxiation at all.

And you need an editor/ptoofreader.

You wrote: "...when she had allowed herself to be tired up." TIED, not TIRED.

Two stars.

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Writing is my outlet. Ready to publish my first novella (8 chapters). Fourth and final instalment of The Affair series nearing completion. Open to story requests!