All Comments on 'The First Meeting'

very good and enyoyable

The part starting with "The meeting" is redundant

Hi. I do appreciate this is erotica and not necessarily intended to be fine writing, but you're in sore need of a proof reader. It's just hard to get into a story when you have to reread every sentence because of typos and grammar errors. I'm sure this story will be fine once that occurs. Good luck.