by neha_d_angel
The story progression is so very natural. It seems very real.
Then you will keep getting One Star rating from me.
why don' you write it's next part i'm dying for it
its a great story building in but trying writing a longer one. u have got the skills to write a good one.
Hi neha it is good story you need to write more. i liked the panty part bcoz i lov ladies used panties.
u can mail me or send me ur feedback on silkpantyslut my id.
if u wish u can send me ur panties too.
Arvind
Hi Neha,
This was better than the last one. the buildup is great and the feelings of a teenage girl who enjoys the sensations even if she knows that it is not right is described very nicely
Aakash
Mmm. Your a sick slutt letting those nasty strangers touch you! #unbelieveable.