All Comments on 'The Flaming Girls Ch. 06'

no it needs 1 more chapter to where that girl is charlie and robin is not far behind and they get him . they do a number on him

Hi Michele I think you need an other chapter to finish the story properly.

But any way congrats it is a very nice story with lovely love making scenes.

I love the trend your writing has taken. I don't feel like this ended quite right. Too many loose pieces. I love how you are tying previous characters into the stories. And intertwines time lines. Give us a little more, please!!!

She lives in Australia or New Zealand, don't know which, and writes stories about bikers in the southwest USA and slashers in Dreary ole England. Excellent stories mind you. I had wished Charlie and Robin would get that bastard, (I am a redhead fanatic myself) but realisticlly they knew he was gonna slip the noose with his connections so they went with the cash. Sadly he lives to kill again. How the wife didn't run after the knife episode is also crazy, So he's on the loose, but Michele is still up and running. Best author live long and write more....... MicheleNylons!

Loved the story....didn’t like the ending.....felt rushed with too many loose ends....needed one more chapter I think...

I' m a stickler for happy ends. So I am content with the fate of Robin & Charlie. But a real happy end would mean putting the slasher and the filthy Edward Bard in prison. A sequel perhaps...⭐⭐⭐⭐

Michele my dear, I have been intrigued by this series of stories, but I would love another chapter. Middleton needs to be caught with a mountain of evidence. He is resuming his serial crimes and he probably has his trophies with him in Scotland, including the knife. Chief Constable Edward Bard needs to be censured and removed, short of being charged for interfering with a criminal investigation. As soon as he saw the warrent he had no legal grounds for telling Middleton, friend or not ... With Robin and Charlie going to Bangkok maybe he is probably going to surprise her with a surgery option ! Just my opinion, but the storyline was pointing to it. TG Tiffany

nice story. sometimes life is not fair. i would like though at some point in the future an extra chapter perhaps about walter getting caught.

Brilliant I didn’t want it to finish really really great

Oh I am so disappointed by the end of this story !

Both the slasher and the top copper should have received their just dues for being such trash among humanity.

I am glad that Robin took the cash to do good for Charlie !

I voted a 2 star for the last page.

I loved this story and got very involved with the characters...except I was very disappointed

in the in the (non)ending. I felt there was no conclusion to the story at all. You are a very good writer but IMHO you dropped the ball on this one.