by make_some_noise
Brilliant! So very very sexy, loved the corny dialogue. I’d be happy to be arrested like that any time!
Tess (uk)
Lovely differeret twist on the senario and sparse enough to be a quick read. You've taught me a thing or two about a fast entry.
Keep it up Honey.
WOW!...men in blue so forceful knowing just what to do, fantastic fantasy, erotic fun, would love to be joining in with this one!...yep i was there feeling it, reeeally feeeeling it...tasting it, savouring it...the build up...the cescendo bursting with exquisite cum...mmmm yeah i want some! maybe i'll take a drive, or a cold shower! great stuff, keep 'em coming honey!!!...Jx
Sure, there are loads of stories about girls and cops, but you managed to find a freshness and downright devilish take that was original and really enjoyable. Well done.
This was a terrific story! Please add more to it when they go to her house! Great job!