All Comments on 'The Full Force of the Law'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Brilliant! So very very sexy, loved the corny dialogue. I’d be happy to be arrested like that any time!

Tess (uk)

JackLuisJackLuisover 15 years ago
Makes me want to be a Copper

Lovely differeret twist on the senario and sparse enough to be a quick read. You've taught me a thing or two about a fast entry.

Keep it up Honey.

bjblissbjblissover 15 years ago
gimme gimme gimme more more more!!!

WOW!...men in blue so forceful knowing just what to do, fantastic fantasy, erotic fun, would love to be joining in with this one!...yep i was there feeling it, reeeally feeeeling it...tasting it, savouring it...the build up...the cescendo bursting with exquisite cum...mmmm yeah i want some! maybe i'll take a drive, or a cold shower! great stuff, keep 'em coming honey!!!...Jx

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 15 years ago
great stuff

Sure, there are loads of stories about girls and cops, but you managed to find a freshness and downright devilish take that was original and really enjoyable. Well done.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 15 years ago
Nice story.

Please carry on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Haven't I read this story a couple of thousand

times before?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow

Quick, someone hand me a fan!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
mmm

My goodness that was hot! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GREAT!!!!!!!!

This was a terrific story! Please add more to it when they go to her house! Great job!

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