All Comments on 'The Full Package - Sunday'

Lust filled the air.. Expectantly I await more....

Its not that it's too long - it's that it is boring.

Thank you for well written, erotic story. Welcome relief from the deluge of really short stories craming 3 orgasms , one in each, 'opening' and a facial to boot in 4 paragraphs.

Cannot wait for Monday.

Great writing and characters. Can not wait for the next chapter.

The sister belongs there. Goofy.

The start of this story directs us to The Full Package - Prologue, but no such story exists in this author's submissions. Very confused about where to find the start.

im thinking of a tightrope walker way u lead ur readers thru the raucous imaginative content not just the hotstuff but yeah that as well i thoroughly enjoy long stories regularly >8 pgs sadly true there not a plethora of them v impressed by ur inventive creative machinations makes 4 v rewarding n memorable readg