All Comments on 'The Full Package - Sunday'

Searched for the Prologue you mentioned in your intro, but a search of all of Lit didn't turn it up.

This part of the story is interesting, and I'm noting the clues in the narrative to see how close I wind up bring to where you take it.

Four stars for this part.

im thinking of a tightrope walker way u lead ur readers thru the raucous imaginative content not just the hotstuff but yeah that as well i thoroughly enjoy long stories regularly >8 pgs sadly true there not a plethora of them v impressed by ur inventive creative machinations makes 4 v rewarding n memorable readg

The start of this story directs us to The Full Package - Prologue, but no such story exists in this author's submissions. Very confused about where to find the start.

The sister belongs there. Goofy.

Great writing and characters. Can not wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for well written, erotic story. Welcome relief from the deluge of really short stories craming 3 orgasms , one in each, 'opening' and a facial to boot in 4 paragraphs.

Cannot wait for Monday.

Its not that it's too long - it's that it is boring.

Lust filled the air.. Expectantly I await more....