All Comments on 'The Game'

by billy_boy967

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
SO sensual

I truly enjoyed how she toyed with him but did not inflict too much pain on him. It is a beautiful thing when a woman takes control. Deep down men love this.

billy_boy967billy_boy967over 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I'm glad you liked the story so much! I've been a long time lurker here at Lit and this is my first submission and it's really great getting feedback. Especially positive feedback ;)

I probably already have more ideas than time, but story requests would be very welcome. Stay tuned!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Once loose

How badly did he hurt her? Because after her abuse of him both physically and verbally, I can't imagine any man not hurting her before throwing her manipulative ass out the door.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What

What a load of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I CONCUR WITH 8/21/18...

What a reeking load of shit as told. The only redeeming aspect you could have taken was to reveal them as a married couple seeking to jack up their love life

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

Well written with unusual twists.

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